Creative Writing Series II: Woman

The second image in my creative writing series...Woman...

1) Essence bled from her shattered glamor as death whirls around her fractured soul; scattering her mortality to the winds like a gale over the dry desert sands.

2) Enchanting insolence clear within her eyes; her last breath fades as the tempest rifts her being to nothing more than a rotting illusion in the darkness.

Hmmm...any good, or over the top???

Creative Writing Series 1: The Autumn Tree

So, because I'm in a writing funk I've decided to do a creative writing series in which I randomly choose a photo and describe it...creatively. Let's see how this goes...and if anyone wants to comment or give their own creative descriptions of the photo...please feel free to do so.

Okay...the autumn tree...hmmmm...

1) Fall reveals itself in the blazing passion of its fiery veil; bursting forth from its splayed bows, gnarled and twisted with the ages.

2) An enshrouding mantle, ablaze with the embers of the coming equinox; shadowing all beneath its sprawling limbs.

3) The Great Mother's hand, shaking off Her summer cloak to revel in the coming autumnal splendor.